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"This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety.

Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important.

So write with a combination of short, medium, and long sentences. Create a sound that pleases the reader’s ear. Don’t just write words. Write music.”

- Gary Provost

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Joseph Rowe's avatar

Superb advice, with an excellent demonstration!

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Janette Parr's avatar

Spot on! As an editor and a writer, I am always very conscious of the ‘music of the words’ in my clients’ work, as well as in my own.

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Amogh's avatar

iconic

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Mehret Biruk's avatar

Beautiful!

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Test's avatar

Loved this

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Leslie Monteiro's avatar

I love it. Thanks for mentioning this.

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Karla Jacobs's avatar

An undergrad composition teacher told us to read your draft out loud in the editing process. I catch so many more mistakes that way than if I just read it in my head, and the dog digs it because he thinks I'm talking to him.

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Ryan Pond | NUEXGUY's avatar

I read everything out loud. My own work. Other's work. Anything. Everything hits different out loud for some reason. Great advice though! 🙌🍻🔥

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Chris Oestereich's avatar

I listen to everything via text-to-speech to see if the phrasing sounds natural.

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Ryan Pond | NUEXGUY's avatar

No problem! hahahaha

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Test's avatar

Love this one. Building on what you shared here, another one that works well with this one is to begin with the last paragraph, edit it, then go to the previous one, editing your way up from the end reading aloud. Basically the idea is that we all edit the first paragraph 10x more than the last. Reading up from the bottom helps give more attention to the end.

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Karla Jacobs's avatar

I do the same thing in the nitty gritty part of editing. It helps to look at each paragraph as a stand alone piece to be made as strong as possible. After that, it's basically just polishing and smoothing.

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Lyle McKeany's avatar

100%. I did this just last night and caught so many things!

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Tom Carlisle's avatar

This was an absolute revelation for me too. It's amazing the kind of glaring errors you can miss otherwise: really easy to end up sounding like a space alien without meaning to.

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Andō's avatar

I do this, and it works every time.

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Livable City's avatar

You realize this quickly when you do something like creating a podcast script. If you don't read it out loud before recording the piece, you'll be very sorry. :)

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Gerard Jones's avatar

Read your stuff out loud. Act it. Revel in it. If you can’t read it out loud, what you’ve written sucks. Write it again. Get a voice. It may take awhile but until you get a natural voice, a comfortable voice, a commanding voice, a voice that’s not full of shit, a voice with authority…you’re the author, after all, you need authority to write, period. Until you figure all those things out, you won’t write anything worth writing or reading, by anyone, including you.

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Jousef Murad's avatar

“Nobody tells this to people who are beginners, I wish someone told me. All of us who do creative work, we get into it because we have good taste. But there is this gap. For the first couple years you make stuff, it’s just not that good. It’s trying to be good, it has potential, but it’s not. But your taste, the thing that got you into the game, is still killer. And your taste is why your work disappoints you. A lot of people never get past this phase, they quit. Most people I know who do interesting, creative work went through years of this. We know our work doesn’t have this special thing that we want it to have. We all go through this. And if you are just starting out or you are still in this phase, you gotta know its normal and the most important thing you can do is do a lot of work. Put yourself on a deadline so that every week you will finish one story. It is only by going through a volume of work that you will close that gap, and your work will be as good as your ambitions. And I took longer to figure out how to do this than anyone I’ve ever met. It’s gonna take awhile. It’s normal to take awhile. You’ve just gotta fight your way through.”

― Ira Glass

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Sarah Kmon's avatar

Yes!! This has stuck with me since that speech.

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Fred Ermlich's avatar

I spoiled myself. A poem I wrote when I was 8 made it into a collection. It was a stupid thing about "pencils." But clever... I guess I'm an idiot-savant or something. Not that I don't take advice. I love advice. Advice has kept me fresh since that pencil poem 60 years ago...

Fred

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eaglepost's avatar

Beautiful!

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Jeffery Saddoris's avatar

Don't combine writing and editing - make them separate tasks. On writing days, just get ideas out of your head and onto the page — no grammar checks, no "it might sound better this way." Just get the words out. On edit days, don't add anything new - force yourself to only revise for flow and cohesion.

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end notes's avatar

Love this!

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Anjali Venugopal's avatar

Thank you. Needed just that.

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Harrison Satcher's avatar

"There is no good writing, only good editing"

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Dr. Pooja S.'s avatar

Stephen King said “To write is human, to edit is divine”

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Dr. Pooja S.'s avatar

Also, “the editor is always right”!

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Leslie Monteiro's avatar

Editing is hard.

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Edward L. Nice's avatar

If there is no writing to edit.............

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Eve Ramos's avatar

"Write it anyway." This was advice given to NYT journalist Sandra E Garcia by her mentor and it's always in the back of my mind. Even if you don't think anyone will care or read it or if you think it'll suck, write it anyway. Write it anyway.

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Leslie Monteiro's avatar

Another nice advice.

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Fred Ermlich's avatar

I absolutely, 200% agree with that. Nothing like a fresh eye.

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Chrissy Hennessey's avatar

I love this one!

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EKO's avatar

Start before you are ready.

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EmeraldCityNotebook's avatar

Good answer

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Victoria Fraser's avatar

Write drunk. Edit Sober.

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EmeraldCityNotebook's avatar

Makes perfect sense

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Filipe Urriça's avatar

It makes so much sense.

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Greg LaVoi's avatar

❤️

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Ellen Levitt's avatar

That's crap advice.

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Victoria Fraser's avatar

The main takeaway for me when I heard it was to not to do both at the same time and that writing should be fun. Editing it where all the hard work and magic happens.

Either way, it works well for me. You can't knock it 'til you try it ;)

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Janette Parr's avatar

I agree with you. My problem is when my clients appear to have ‘written drunk’ and expect me to edit their work ‘sober’ :) Thankfully it happens very rarely.

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Terrell Johnson's avatar

I heard the novelist Donna Tartt say this once in an interview and it’s always stuck with me: “No fun for the writer, no fun for the reader.”

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Cristina Ashbaugh's avatar

"The road to hell is paved with adverbs"

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Dia Lupo's avatar

I am admittedly paving it...

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Cristina Ashbaugh's avatar

we all are

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sean minogue's avatar

Unplug your wifi router.

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Daniel Brooks's avatar

Excellent comment.

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Ben's avatar

From Jerry Seinfeld - "Write everyday and cross that day on calendar. This way you will form a chain and your skills will compound"

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Lydia Sugarman's avatar

Every day, write. Just don't make it everyday writing, try to make it special.

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Susan Olson's avatar

Stephen King, On Writing, paperback version page 139. “If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot. ...no shortcut. It’s so true..reading a lot introduces you to different styles and helps you discern good prose..eventually. But there is no substitute for putting words on the page. It feels awkward at first, but keep plugging. Do your utmost to finish what you start. You’ll be so proud of yourself for finishing, you’ll be more likely to write again

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Fred Ermlich's avatar

Exactly right. Reading is a constant source of inspiration and a chance to see all kinds of writing styles. I read a book (Inferno) by Chris Cleave and it taught me how to write without punctuation. More that that really. But the fantastic flow of a work not slowed down by commas and crap is undeniable.

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James Graham's avatar

Ya’ll barking up the wrong tree. You think writing is made up of words. It’s made out of your life, your imagination, your passions. The writer is a witness. Try getting out, then you don’t have to worry about empty pages or unforgiving screens that are busy with corrections staring back at you. Shut it off. Go out there and get lost. It’s a short life. Are you going to sit at the desk and worry about the words - too many, too few ? - like a million other scriveners ? There’s people out there who need their story told. You could meet them. It could be inspiring. I’ve read some great books that are badly written - great because the story was humane, intense, intimate. This isn’t a story but it did happen to me. Two summers ago, when I was hanging by the skin of my teeth, before my new job started here in Paris, I took the long train to a neighborhood where I knew there was plentiful food to be had after the markets closed. It was a long train ride and I had plenty of time to think about what a nice botch I’d made of things. I was hungry and I was hunting for throwaway food. A young woman sat down across from me. Eventually I noticed she had a canvas bag at her feet, which was emblazoned with the following words, in English no less : Bad Choices Make Great Stories. I could hardly hold myself together I was laughing so hard. How could I say to her, Ain’t that the truth, in French, without there being misunderstandings ? She’d really saved my life. Maybe she didn’t know what her bag said. Maybe she was a writer. She gave me a moment of levity before I got off the train and went to meet my friends, the homeless cooking the food they’d collected, always sharing, everybody bringing what they’d scrounged up from the nearby richy-rich boroughs. One last thing : I’m convinced that cafés play a major role in the humanist tradition, and are the real reason French writers are so damn prodigious. They write there, surrounded by others. They feed off the vibe. It’s good to take your private practice out into the world. Apologies for going on so long. I’m over at the euro desk paris if you care to.

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Mitchell's avatar

Holy crap, thank you so much

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James Graham's avatar

Given the bottomless gorge of the internet, thank YOU for your response. Visit the euro desk and start a conversation. I have hopes, vain no doubt, that it could be a cool place to hang out.

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Gerard Jones's avatar

"The train pulled in. I wasn't so sure of my plans once I saw the engine. I kissed Molly with all the spirit I had left...I was sad for once, really sad, for everybody, for myself, for her, for everybody. Maybe that's what we look for all our lives, the worst possible grief, to make us truly ourselves before we die...Good, admirable Molly, if she ever reads these lines in some place I never heard of, I want her to know that my feelings for her haven't changed, that I love her and always will in my own way, and that she can come here any time she pleases and share my bread and my furtive destiny. If she's no longer beautiful, hell, that's all right too! We'll manage. I've kept so much of her beauty in me, so living and so warm, that I've plenty for both of us, to last at least twenty years, the rest of our lives."

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James Graham's avatar

Beautiful, an overused word, but beautiful nonetheless. Yours ?

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Gerard Jones's avatar

Beautiful is okay. It's Louis-Ferdinand Celine, by the way...but you probably know that already, being as how you write stuff about Paris. I'll tell you a word that should be banned from the English language. Amazing. Anyone who says "amazing" in any context is automatically an idiot.

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James Graham's avatar

We could make a list... and it wouldn't prove anything.

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James Graham's avatar

I realize that this text proposes what some might call a Fool's Errand : that most of the people here are at the desk as a respite from the world, after the world, after they've escaped from the world, and they want to worry about adverbs, pro or con. When that really isn't the issue. Where are you in the world is.

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Mike Roddy's avatar

Shorten it.

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Ms. Wonderful Film Club's avatar

I re-read Rainer Maria Rilke's book, Letters to a Young Poet, all the time. It is cheaper than any MFA program and it contains all the information one needs to know. In it he shares this quote, "The necessary thing is after all but this: solitude, great inner solitude. Going into oneself and for hours meeting no one--this one must be able to attain." (He also says not to undertake the heroic journey of writing unless you feel you must, and that so much of what we read is junk, while very few create true art. :) )

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Greg LaVoi's avatar

❤️

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David Callaway's avatar

Write like you talk.

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Mukunth's avatar

First: "The only way to write better is to write more."

Second: "Write what you'd like to read."

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Nationalize Amazon.ca ⏳🍊 🍉's avatar

Depends on what kind of writing you are doing/ My doctoral dissertation advisor told me to write as if every word cost $10 and I was on a budget. Make sure you choose only the words that do the job.

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Owen Morawitz's avatar

Kurt Vonnegut's Basics of Creative Writing, #5: "Start as close to the end as possible."

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Aron Kuehnemann's avatar

Writers start, authors finish

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Kae Lani Palmisano's avatar

To read as much as you write -- possibly read even more so.

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WilburDaCrackedEggCampbell's avatar

"Always Write Your Heart! Your Head, and Emotions Will Follow!"

("My Parents")

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Yinka Adeyemi's avatar

Keep a notebook near you at all times. Sentences come to you at night. Make the effort to scribble down the bare bones. I need to follow my own advice.

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Andrew's avatar

Never use unnecessary words. Concise writing is clearer and more persuasive. Strunk & White has impacted my writing more than anything else.

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Janette Parr's avatar

This isn’t possible 100% of the time, but just considering it will improve your writing:

"Let your writing ‘rest’ for a few days. Then start reading it, from the beginning, and when you get to a sentence or clause that makes you say, ‘Yes, that’s good’, put it at the very start of the piece, and rework the rest accordingly”.

I’m guessing if you don’t find that ‘good’ bit, it’s a clue you should redraft the whole lot :)

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Topher's avatar

This method works really well when writing music as well.

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Daniel Brooks's avatar

Good comment, letting it rest. The bit that needs to be changed leaps out at you.

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Mark Frauenfelder's avatar

A writing tip from author/editor Paul Tough, who has been an editor at Harper’s and The New York Times Magazine: “One editor’s trick I started using a while ago is to ask a thwarted writer to start off by writing me a letter on the topic. What comes out is often much more fluid, funny, on-topic, and well-structured than a formal magazine article.”

This reminds me of The Whole Earth Review’s writer’s guidelines for reviews: “Write your review. Then write us a letter explaining why we should devote space to your item. Throw away your review and send us the letter.” When I was an editor at Wired in 1993, I was in charge of the reviews section and I used the same guidelines. And when I was an editor at Make in 2004, I used them there, too.

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David Sakrison's avatar

Mark Twain wrote: "The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between the lightning and the lightning bug." He also wrote: "All good writing is rewriting, and the first draft of anything is sh*t."

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Dr. Pooja S.'s avatar

“The scariest part is always just before you start... you can, you should, and if you’re brave enough to start, you will” Stephen King

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Dia Lupo's avatar

“All writing should be a war against cliche.” - as passed to me from a journalist friend/mentor who’s written for every publication I could ever dream of. I definitely still fail at sticking to it, but it’s really changed my approach to storytelling.

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Chris Pawar's avatar

Write how you speak! If you can’t read it aloud, others won’t want to read it at all.

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Tom Carlisle's avatar

I'd like this a hundred times if I could. It's a surprising difficult discipline tho: it takes a lot of editing to sound like yourself.

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Chris Pawar's avatar

I try to sound like better-spoken version of myself. Not a high hill to climb!

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Chris Pawar's avatar

Thanks! That’s like, such an important thing to like, point out! :))

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Gavin Brennan's avatar

"Write on your own terms. If they do not like your style & focus, let them buy someone else's book. Never take anyone's advice on writing, especially if the person is boring." - Nassim Taleb

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James Graham's avatar

And there we have an example of a rare useful adverb.

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Don't get it right, get it wrote.

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John Matheson's avatar

Write when you are manic, and edit when you are depressed...

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The Cholent's avatar

Don't fall in love with your words.

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Saima's avatar

Write everyday

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EmeraldCityNotebook's avatar

Same for all of the arts. Refine the talent if you can.

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Test's avatar

That’s what Seth Godin says...is what Seth Goldstein says.

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Ivan Landabaso's avatar

Be succinct.

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Erik Davis's avatar

Kill yr darlings.

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Cathryn Louis's avatar

Yep! This is my favorite. It hurts, but makes me think about every word.

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Michael Arturo's avatar

Writing as though you've got a train to catch - Oscar Wilde

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Andreas Jennische's avatar

There is no such thing as inspiration.

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Ryan Bradford's avatar

Every thing you write should be a small act of revenge

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David Slack's avatar

“Don’t write about the whole wall, write about that one brick”

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Tom White's avatar

“Show, don’t tell.”

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Cathryn Louis's avatar

Love this one to. Simple, easy to remember.

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Tommy Wright's avatar

Begin.

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Hilbert Haar's avatar

Good writers write; great writers steal.

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Hilary Jacobson's avatar

To begin a non-fiction piece, use the simplest vocabulary possible - later lift the level as needed.

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Don't edit while you're writing your first draft. Don't slow up. Just let the words flow, unheeded. The art of writing is in the re-write.

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Terese Mailhot tweeted out some advice this summer that's stuck with me ever since: "When I'm teaching students how to write about trauma, I often ask them to carry five other stories about themselves for protection. Like a verbal medicine bundle: there's what happened to you, how you survived, and carry some other stories, like: How you learned to gut a fish, or how you used to bind your own books as a child, the time you stood up for yourself at work, occasions where you felt joy. Carry many stories about yourself, ... give yourself dynamism and let that dynamism inform your work. We're more than what happened to us, but it's also okay if you just need to sit in the pain and execute how awful it felt. I support all victim and survivor stories, any way you tell it. Holding five other stories is mostly a safety measure to not feel like I'm only one thing."

Link to thread: https://twitter.com/TereseMarieM/status/1277360137984827392

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Sarita Gregory's avatar

My mentor once told me that “Writing isn’t precious. Don’t make it special or sentimental. Make it something I have to do, everyday, like brushing my teeth or washing dishes.”

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Alma Hoffmann's avatar

One sentence per day is more than you had yesterday. When I was writing my dissertation, this helps me so much. It made it much more manageable. I used that approach when writing my book too. It helps.

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